for this i tried to C4D whore/ make a more cluttered sig instead of the simplistic ones i aomestimes make



this i went for more of a "cinematic" sig.



C&C

1st i think has some great effects near the jaw, but the rest of the sig is to messy and doesnt have a strong focal

2nd one, add some lighting or something to bring out a focal, get rid of the bad text (no reason to add text if it doesnt help the sig) and work on depth a bit more and i think ud be on to something